TODAY THE ESCAPED 22-YEAR-OLD ARABIAN HORSE, STAR, WAS RETURNED TO 10-YEAR-OLD ATHENA MUZUMDAR AT HER MONTEVINA ROAD CORRAL.
STAR WAS FOUND TWO WEEKS AGO AT HOME ON KENT WAY AFTER GALLOPING AMONG COMMUTERS ON HIGHWAY 17. ONCE FOUND, STAR WAS THEN TAKEN TO A SAN MARTIN ANIMAL SHELTER.
THE HUMAN SOCIETY OFFICIALS WERE RELUCTANT TO RELEASE STAR. THEY THOUGH HE MAY HAVE BEEN MISTREATED, BUT THAT WAS QUICKLY CLEARED UP ONCE HIS HEALTH PROBLEMS WERE EXPLAINED.
THE CULPRIT BEHIND STAR'S ADVENTURE, ACCORDING TO SUZANNE CRISTALLO, CORRAL OWNER IN SOUTH LOS GATOS, WAS A PONY NAMED OREO
CRISTALLO SAYS "HE KNOWS HOW TO UNDO ALL THE GATES UNLESS YOU CHAIN THEM."
THE ATHENA IS HAPPY THAT STAR IS SAFE AND BACK AT HOME.
Your lead has a little too much info and shouldn't start with the "when." Think "delayed identification."
ReplyDeleteOtherwise, this is pretty good. 17/20