Introduction
My name is Matt and I'm a Public Relations Major here at State. I'm a Willow Glen local and spend a lot of time floating around downtown. I've never really blogged before, unless you count updating the world on what I'm thinking through the very elite and exclusive sites twitter and facebook. I really like reading about the news in any form. Whether it be from hard hitting news feeds from Perez Hilton or the left over New York Times at my work, I like knowing what's going on in the world.
Outside of attending school and working diligently to make you the perfect latte at Starbucks, I enjoy a myriad of things. I enjoy reading comic books, fashion magazines, and fiction when I have the time. I like to over dress for any occasion possible. I like to oversleep and eat too. Pretty much to sum me up I'm addicted to coffee, fashion, and reading.
Fog Index:
16+11 x .4=10.8
So I think that my Fog Index is telling me that my sentences are way too long. I had so many sentences that had over 22 words that it really makes my sentences wordy. It has taught me that I need to be more concise with my righting so that people don't loose interest due to short attention span. Pretty much I need to condense.
Yes, you need to condense ... and proofread! (It should be writing, not "righting," lose, not "loose.")
ReplyDeleteHaving some long sentences is fine, as long as you mix it up with some shorter ones.
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