Wednesday, a pipe fitter suffered third-degree burns and is in serious condition at the intensive care unit at Springfield Hospital.
Duance La Chance, 55, contacted a power line carrying 15, 000 volts while installing new pipes.
Immediate Identification Lead:
Actor and comedian Chevy Chase was appointed to the College's board of trustees yesterday at Bard College because he is a famous alumnus of the college.
Pipe fitter -- good choice to use a delayed ID lead, but don't start your lead with "when" and try to include some more info (such as where and how it happened) in the lead. 8/10
ReplyDeleteChevy Chase -- close, but you don't need to tell me he's famous ... and you don't know that he was appointed just because he's a famous alumnus. 8/10